Here are my first attempts:
I then simplified to get this:
The feedback about this was about keeping it simple, and drawing inspiration from a title sequence that I like. After trawling the internet and various title websites, I found this intro, and the actual title part of the intro was appealing. It looked simple, classy and bold. What do you think?:
...and so from that, I created this...which so far, is what I'm sticking with.
Let me know what you think - it would be good to get as much feedback as I can :)